You know I have a crapload of 10th muse comics around here somewhere, I met the guy who came up with her at this tiny little comic convention in my hometown and he convinced me to buy a bunch of them lol. It's an okay story but the artwork rocks. You really captured her too, love the expression on her face ^_^
i love the energy/ mid action pose of it... but something bothered me and i realize what it is... the torso needs to be lower to the pelvis. the torso and all has great perspective/ foreshortening but the pelvis and what not has no perspective, the belly button should be right below the breasts anywayz im sure you see this... but thought i'd throw it out there, would help make her look even more hunkered down like a spring w/ pressure on it ready to pounce!